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  1. Chris_Halderman Jul 19th 2008
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    I'm finally done with my latest artwork! After 6 tries i finally got what i wanted.

    Animadverto. It's Latin. Meaning: Noticed - Check it out.

    http://flickr.com/photos/halderman/2683053799/

    C&C Please :)
  2. TylerBramer Jul 19th 2008
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    There doesn't seem to be a focus in the artwork. Your smudging and brushing looks like it might have been overdone.
  3. Pseudonym Jul 20th 2008
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    I like the concept, and the way you've blended the hair into the background works really well. One small thing that might work better would be to keep the detail areas on her face clear and unaltered so that they are *noticed* better. That might mean her eyes, note, and lips. Right now my eyes aren't really drawn anywhere because the whole image is equally patterned (hence the "overdone" impression). Otherwise well done. The color palette works really well with the distortion, and for some reason that line defining her shoulder works really well for me.
  4. Chris_Halderman Jul 20th 2008
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    Aaahh yea! The face. Lots of people on other forums didn't like it, it's kinda bothering me to now. Just had no time cause it was around 3am and needed sleep :P
  5. Chris_Halderman Jul 20th 2008
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