1. Plan-B Jun 7th 2008 edited

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   Comments? good or bad. constructive or deconstructive. lol thanks
   
   http://plan-b5.deviantart.com/art/Heart-of-the-Country-88008194
   
   and i know it's kind of small. it was bigger in PS when i did it.
2. Iceberg Jun 8th 2008 edited

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   I have very little experience in photography, but I like this picture. I agree with you in that the small size of the photo fails to bring out the details of the shot. Another thing that you might want to work on next time is to create a focal point. This shot seems to be set on an area between the two poles and to the right of the closest housing, which can sometimes be detrimental to the "coherence" of the photograph.
   
   But, I like it!
3. MikeWilson Jun 8th 2008

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   It's very sharp for a point and click, nice work. I'll look at it when it is less 3:15 am.
4. Fredrik Jun 8th 2008

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   it's a nice photo. I do agree with Iceberg that it is missing a focal point. The composition is a bit flat as well and this photo would really benefit from using the rule of thirds (I wrote a few lines about it in my composition tutorial).
   I think you've got something here, and I think (if you live close to this place) that you will get aa great photo if you think some more about focal point and composition next time. I'd love to see a follow-up if that would be possible, it's an interesting landscape.
5. Plan-B Jun 8th 2008 edited

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   ha thanks guys. we were on a car show cruise through this place. and at a stop i was like oh that looks cool. hurried up and took the shot.
   so thanks for the advice.
   
   and no. i live no where near that place. i'm about 4 and 1/2 hours away. lol
   
   Edit: is there a way i could bring in a focal point using ps? maybe blur the surrounding area or something?

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