1. dehere Apr 17th 2008 edited

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   hey, i'm a newbie in the design-world. this is my work and i know that it's really a beginner's work. in fact i don't feel confident with it.. :D anyway, can you guys give me some constructive critics? i'm willing to listen to any comments...
   
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2. Neo Apr 17th 2008

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   hmm its strange but its not that bad. considering ur a beginner its obvious its gonna get better. when i started out i was worse than that, so don't worry. as far as what could be better, idk its up to the artist to some point but maybe someone else can help in that area
3. Pseudonym Apr 17th 2008

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   I think one of the main things to start off in any design is to have an objective. Even when you're just scribbling ideas, having a direction in mind goes light years towards making your doodles or even finished art pieces more coherent and pleasing to the eye.
   When I first looked at this piece, the first element that stuck out was the head, then the blue butterfly, then the obscene text. I'm not sure if the main message you're trying to get across is that delightful phrase, but if so, you may want to highlight it in the picture through use of color or pattern. Anything to make it stick out from the rest of the image. As a designer, its your job to guide the person's eyes as they look at the image. This 'map' seems to be missing in the image. I'm not lead to a single element, but different ones every time I go back to it.
   
   Hope that's helpful in some way. As Neo said, good job considering you've not much experience.
4. dehere Apr 20th 2008

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   thanks guys. i really appreciate it.. :) gonna work in a new design after this.. hehehe...

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